This lesson i have look at the Merlin script, and what i have done so far is i have compared to my movie clip and i might have to make so change with my clip and me watching Merlin might help me elevate my clip. i think that if i use some of the thing like.
EXT. CAMELOT (MAIN SQUARE) - DAY 1. FR.
The square is a hive of activity. A caravan of colourful carts is being unloaded by ACROBATS, DANCERS, JUGGLERS, STRONG MEN and JESTERS.
An ACROBAT back flips off a wagon and lands on his feet. JUGGLERS practice their routine, sending batons high into the air.
And i could use thing like this to help me with my clip and if you look right at the top you can see the [EXT] that means out side so the first clip is set out side.
Some good points made here Cassius. read my previous notes to see what you have to do next.
ReplyDeleteYou need to get settled and start working earlier next lesson. You can work much harder than this, and you can make more progress during a lesson than you did here.