Thursday, 8 December 2011

Story line

there was 3 kids and one hidden man, it started with the 3 kid in the class room going home after the DT with there head teacher. kid 1 name John kid 2 name Ray j kid 3 name big h and the shadow.
introduction-
 it started one day when the 3 kid where walking home and they where playing football. and ray j kicked the ball into one of the grave yards on the wall it started to rain and thunder, john started to cry and big h started to laugh.
par 1-
ray j want to jump over the fence and get because it was his big brothers ball and he want to get the ball. john want to go home and leave the ball so they had a vote in the poring rain.ray j voted yes john voted no and big h want to stay out for longer so he voted yes. so the 3 boy jumped over the big wet wall ray j feel over and cut his arm and blood was poor out like a water wall.
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the boy where scared but ray j want to care on and get that ball the could see the ball at near some grave yards so ray j went to pick up the ball and he could see some shadow standing over the grave yard. he pick up the ball and they all ran out the scary grave yard. so they all went home and something was following then but the 3 kid where to happy to see the the shadow was follow then the big h could see it in the corn of his eye. the next day when the went to school the 3 kid went to there lesson then the shadow want inside the teacher.
par-3
the 3 kid had a DT but they so good lesson but big h new what was going because you cant get a DT for begin good so he told the 3 boy that the teacher had the black shadow in side and they started to laugh. i the bell went and the teacher told them to stay behind. big h ran house but ray j and john stayed and the shadow came out and with no question he killed to the boys and when big h came in the next day ray j and john never existed. so hear a lesson to all you young kids out there, never go into a graveyard in the night.

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